Oct
06

Anna Week 6 100WC

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I plunged into the icy water. I couldn’t breath. I wasn’t entirely sure what was happening. 1 minute I was playing with Imogen, my sister and the next, dark shadow loomed over me and dragged me into the river.

There were trees towering over them and Imogen was screaming. Can’t blame her. Suddenly, flora popped up on to the surface, panting and gasping for breath. But she was swimming the wrong way. Imogen had no choice but to get in to catch her so off she went, across the river.

I was blinded. But it was only for a few weeks though. Suddenly, I was able to see again.



One Response to “Anna Week 6 100WC”

  1.   Miss Rogerson Says:

    Good structure.
    I think you could have made more of the fact that she was blind and less words for the build up- this may have had more impact.
    Well done!

    Miss R

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