Molly Week 6 100WC

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One day I was playing with my friend hope we were playing on the beach with a beach ball and then the big bully came to the beach we were playing on. His name was Josh Combo he throw sand in my and hopes eyes we went home and we told my mum and we went home and hope was staying for a sleepover the next day we woke up and we were blind we could not see anything at all it was just can see black but then suddenly I could see again. I only had my had In a cushion and Hope said “Silly billy!”

One Response to “Molly Week 6 100WC”

  1.   Miss Rogerson Says:

    Next time, think about sentence structure- reading back through your work and using commas when you pause.

    A good effort, Molly.
    Miss R


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