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Oct
06
Filed Under (General News) by on 06-10-2014 and tagged , , , ,

I plunged into the icy water. I couldn’t breath. I wasn’t entirely sure what was happening. 1 minute I was playing with Imogen, my sister and the next, dark shadow loomed over me and dragged me into the river. There were trees towering over them and Imogen was screaming. Can’t blame her. Suddenly, flora popped […]

Oct
06
Filed Under (General News) by on 06-10-2014 and tagged , , ,

I was watching the water going over my feet suddenly a big golden mysteriou golden bird fly over my head .I ran and followed direction it was going.It landed in this cave. It was like it wanted me.Then i saw people buring things so i went over. They said “here she is ” What were they […]

Oct
01
Filed Under (General News) by on 01-10-2013 and tagged ,

Remember to keep commenting on other peoples work from the 100WC website. Hopefully, by commenting on others, you will receive comments back. You should include what you like about their writing, but most importantly, ways that the author can improve their writing.   Miss Rogerson